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I tap on his first floor window late
He parts the drapes, smiles faintly
Fag? I ask
He dresses for the cold
Joins me outside the residence entrance быстрый займ всем без отказа
We could be chest to chest
Steam enveloped in my shower
We could be front to back
Blanket wrapped in his bed
We could be mouth on mouth
Rain soaked in the park
We could be all this and
More anytime, anywhere
Right now
Redrawing the boundaries of our imaginations
Plunging into oblivion
Instead a thousand hours
In the cold dark we smoke
Inhaling exhaling three feet apart
On the butt-spangled walkway
Under partial moons and slapdash stars
Detailing particulars
Of the unremarkable
Schedules, forecasts, assignments
Without asking or having to he reaches into
My pocket for the lighter
Beyond that
It never goes
Some mix of
His understandable cowardice
Our lovely friendship
The twelve years
Between us
Detains
Drunk at the union or the pub
While the others carry on, their banter a perfect cover
He stares at me in a way that makes me itch
I can arrange him for you, he sneers, if I glance too long at someone
And I laugh as cruelly as possible,
Go on then
We gather our tools, go out to the patio and
Smoke
Meet him halfway
Provide a signal or
Create an opportunity
I can’t, won’t and shouldn’t
He’s the one with
Illusions left to amputate
A big blank book of failures
My need is not him-specific
Only even projected in his general direction
Since he’s always right in front of me
Smoking, a thousand hours in the dark
I mean – I’d be gentle
Oh so gentle
But his heart needs to be a sieve
Whereas now it is a kite
Something is possible between us
I’m not sure what
But a thing is possible
a lot going on here,
a lot of smoking,
adumbrations
tension unrelieved
shadows and exhalations
touch and insinuations
i liked many of these images, like
illusions left to amputate
a big book of failures
butt-spangled walkway
the twelve years line really threw me
but i, as with a lot of poetry,
it isn’t to be deciphered and understood
but felt in your veins
which this one most certainly achieves.
good work/words.
Thank you, S/KT. One of our lecturers yells at us if we try to make our poems “about” something. “Poetry is atmosphere!” he shouts. “Atmosphere!”
Hard not to make a poem about something. Or someone.
Butt-“spangled” is a direct nod to Annie Proulx, whose character Quoyle entered the world “hive-spangled, gut roaring with gas and cramp…”
I see your adumbrations, fine sir, and raise you an absconding.
I don’t really know what to say, apart from how much I liked this. I don’t want my comments to tamper with how much I took from it.
Smithy, it’s all about restraint. Restraining oneself is hot.
i loved the image of partial moons and smoking in the cold dark, i love the mystery of a possible thing…
Slapdash Stars my
friend
and Smoke
Smoke
most similar
in the Hebrew
to
Emptiness
Meaningless
a Vapor
Smoke passes
between us
then it is
gone
Please make welcome
Pony 3.0!
OK ok don’t go writing better stuff in the comments than I did in my post. “Smoke passes between us and then it is gone.” God, perfect.
Can I have that?
What’s
mine
is
yours
dear
restraint.
Nice. I like “he stares at me in a way that makes me itch.”
Looking forward to more poetry from you!
Thanks Kristen!
“Modern Monogamy”
cant wait!
Me neither! 2011? 2012. More like 2012.
Megan
Simon Smithson commented … ” I don’t really know what to say, apart from how much I liked this. I don’t want my comments to tamper with how much I took from it. ”
Which in of itself is funny as doesn’t Simon always say … digression.
Megan, oops you did it again. The thing for me was I could see them at the bar, I could hear the back ground noise, I could see them smoking, breathing, flirting, well almost flirting ? Atmosphere baby … Atmosphere ! I was there … you took me there … and … I can’t wait to go back.
xo
Oh Karl. Thanks for your verbosity.
“He’s the one with
Illusions left to amputate”
Ouch.
“Drunk at the union” – between this and Greg Olear’s 1991 period piece, I’m nostalging wildly.
When I read The Shipping News, I pictured Quoyle as John Lithgow. Not Kevin Spacey for Heaven’s sake.
Hey Steve, so on point. Kevin Spacey just did not work in that role.
The union is where all tiny melodramas come to a head. Different to go there as a mature student (ugh). But the beer is still ice cold and dirt cheap.
Excellents, Megan: “Illusions left to amputate” and “his heart needs to be a sieve”.
Best,
Judy
Oo – felt that. Nice, Megan.
we could be chest to chest… steam enveloped… we could be front to back… that WHOLE section is amazing amazing
that’s exactly how it happens – our spastic fleeting thoughts and spotty attention spans
so beautifully articulated
and for the record, it’s going to be a good thing. even if you are pages 1 through 7 of his book of failures (assuming that’s still what you want to title it by the time you find yourselves on page 3)
🙂
xoxo